It was a cold, dreary day. The rain poured and the wind whistled. Thomas trudged out of the classroom. His final lesson of the day had just ended. His stomach grumbled hungry for a snack. So he hopped on a bus and ran to his favourite fast-food restaurant. "Eight chicken wing pieces." he said to the half-asleep cashier.
Then the chicken wings came out, sizzling and delicious. Thomas inhaled the steam rising from the chicken wings. Ah, heavenly, he thought. Thomas popped one into his mouth, ignoring the burning sensation to focus on the juicy tenderness of the chicken wing. He took a bite when suddenly, he felt it move in his mouth. It moved up and down at a vigorous pace. It's movements became more rapid, almost as if it was jumping. He reluctantly opened his mouth and out it came. It hopped out and onto the table, then the floor and bounced its' way out of the restaurant and onto the street. Thomas simply watched, his jaw dropped. Simply speechless.
By: Anna-Capri Do Y8B
I really like you story!! How did you get the idea of the theme??
ReplyDeleteI got the idea by thinking of what would happen if you ate the bouncing chicken wing? And I came up with this.
Deletesome direct speech would have made your story stronger. But it was still enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteMan, I really just want to eat those chicken wings! By any chance, did you get the name Thomas from "The Maze Runner?"(Sorry, just had to ask)
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